It Happened One Saturday

Nov 29 2007  | Views 422 |  Comments  (21)
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  Wizardprince posted 7 mnths ago

Hi Tanushri,

Nice one. good narration.

Regards,
WizardPrince



  tanushri podder posted 7 mnths ago

thanks Chandrasekhar!



  ChandrashekharB posted 7 mnths ago

how romantic.... couldn't be anymore beautiful than this... :))



  tanushri podder posted 7 mnths ago

Thanks Reeti! Sometimes you are so fascinated with some characters that they become larger than life and lead the story instead of the story leading them into situations.
Thanks for your comment.
Tanushree



  Reeti Roy posted 7 mnths ago

I like the portrayal of characters...even though there's something missing in the story...the characters seem bigger than the story.Wonderful Story nevertheless,as always :)



  mutt posted 7 mnths ago

Nice story. I liked the happy ending.

Mutts



  tanushri podder posted 7 mnths ago

Hi flimflam,
THank you very much for the feedback. I'm floored! Such astute observation! Will correct the mistakes immediately.
Tanushree



  flimflam2 posted 7 mnths ago

quiz time, tanushri podder. something is terribly wrong with each question below which appeared in your story. what is it?


- If it isn’t the good old ‘shadow’? 

- What a long time it has been, Pankaj? 
 

- Am I happy to see you? 

- What a coincidence?
 
- Imagine meeting you within a couple of hours after the thought entered my head?

- What a clever soul you are?


finally, "vow" means a solemn promise. the word you want below is "wow." the two are pronounced differently.

- Vow! I am excited. 


you may now thank me profusely, tanushri podder.


flimflam



  tanushri podder posted 7 mnths ago

Hi Usha,
Thanks for stopping by. Glad you liked the story.
Tanushree



  tanushri podder posted 7 mnths ago

Thanks divine-comedy. Glad you liked the story.
Tanushree





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